Saturday, April 30, 2011

DEATH BE MINE...




Death be kind
Seduce me
Let not life
Reduce me
Let us get tangled
In each other
Let us make
Soft, slow love
Let our souls
Get drenched
Let my passions
Be quenched

Together we'll
Reach the zenith
And then once
We are spent
I'll look you
In the eye
With sated
Unseeing gaze
While you gather
Me in your arms
And murmur
Sweet nothings
In my ears

13 comments:

Amropali said...

the scene in ur room today...consider that repeated.

Silvertongue said...

"oh!"

Anonymous said...

Hmmm... Romanticizing Death, eh?

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

lovely delivery.

thanks for sharing.

Judith C Evans said...

This is a beautiful, haunting poem. Love it!

Anonymous said...

Love your dark invitation to Death, an invite so enticing!

Mystic Margarita said...

It's haunting, yet uplifting at the same time. Loved it.

Anonymous said...

Beautiful =)

Paulami said...

and here i comment bhatia..
not as good as the others but yea different from what you generally write...

Helena said...

Finding that love is as strong as death. A fine read.

$unshine of the Moon said...

thank you all :)

Anonymous said...

love it :)
I don't want to suffer either...I hope it is kind to me when it comes as well. Enjoy the rally!
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Anonymous said...

La Petite Mort.

Well done.